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another experiment poem thingy
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If I touched you,
would you draw away in fear,
If I whispered my thoughts
into your ear?
What would you do
if you knew
my darkest secrets
my feelings true?
would you draw away in fear,
If I whispered my thoughts
into your ear?
What would you do
if you knew
my darkest secrets
my feelings true?
yet another one
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Good work, you can feel the character's uncertainty.
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I would put a stanza separation between lines three and four, and I might split up line three into two lines.
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I would put a stanza separation between lines three and four, and I might split up line three into two lines.